the first draft that i did. i really like the little character and had the idea to use her in all of them, kind of like her dressing up in different outfits. however, i thought this might also take too much attention away from the garment, which is supposed to be the main focus of the piece. so therefore i decided to try and do another one of my drafts.
i really like the way this piece is going. i did it from one of the drawings i had done. i do think it needs some changes, for example the colours might need changing and also the hairstyle, i want to add in the flower that i had done on the other draft because i think that this hairstyle is more true to the traditional japanese hairstyle. it might also help me narrow down my colours if i use the same blues throughout.
we had a crit talking about our drafts. everyone seemed to really like the red one because of the fixed pose and how it would translate throughout all of the postcards. they also talked about maybe trying to simplify the face so ill see how i can work that. and adding different features to the dress, possibly flowers. and then flowers for a nice background, which i agreed with.
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