Started a storyboard and decided to revise it (below). Like the new format better and think it flows better as a short children's story and has a good moral and ending.
The storyline & words go like this:
- Far away in a distant land, there lived a dragon called Biff.
- He was born without any wings.
- He would always watch while the other dragons played in the skies.
- Wishing that he could fly too.
- He tried a lot of different ways to attempt to fly.
- But nothing worked.
- While out on a walk one day, Biff heard cries from the top of a hill.
- It was a princess! Her leg was caught under a fallen tree, with a rockslide quickly approaching!
- Without thinking, Biff sacrificed himself to protect the princess from the rocks.
- To his surprise, his skin transformed into a protective metal, saving him and the princess!
- He was so brave and saved the day with his new skill!
- The princess was so pleased that she decided to make Biff her new protector!
- After this, Biff didn't worry about being different anymore.
- Because different doesn't mean bad.
Really pleased with the story! I think that it has a nice moral and flows quite well, although it does get a bit chunky near the end and if i had more time and resources i would extend the length of it.
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