illustration 1: changing my ideas

At first, the idea that I had in my head and on my storyboards was that the sting would start looking through a keyhole and then you would see the image moving a little bit and then the end title screen. However, I tried it, and it just looks awful. Sorry me. It's terrible. Why did you make this? I hate it. I think the keyhole looks so fake and stupid and you can really tell its just some white shapes thrown together. And I tried to make it better by throwing in the little lens flare so that the image coming out of nowhere wasn't off putting however this just sucked as well. I'm going to have to rethink my ideas a little bit, maybe just getting rid of the keyhole idea and just having the sting start at my image. It was a nice idea in retrospect and if I had more skill in after effects I might have been able to pull it off but, I just don't and that's the harsh truth.