so today we had the final crit before the deadline. it went quite well but a few things were said about little details that i should change. some things i didn't really understand or i'm not sure they really understood my theme. what i was going for was quite a simplified look with not too much going on and the red and blue theme running through to tie them together as a set, however they were saying to maybe add more colour or backgrounds and this just isn't what i wanted.
there were some comments about the original idea for my poster being too boring/doesn't stand out enough. i didn't really know what to do for this because i didn't want to change my whole design, and i actually really liked how the design came out. i thought i used the space quite well. so i'm kind of running with my own gut feeling and keeping the design that i wanted (sorry guys)
i did change some things to it though so that the mushrooms stood out more as a focal point, by just making them the only thing on the poster that has the fuzzy 3D effect. i think this way i am kind of keeping to the feedback from the group as trying to make the mushrooms stand out more than the little guy at the bottom. and i also redid the poster again in ink because i think it gave it a nicer effect than the clean fineliner. i was debating doing the postcard type again in ink instead of fineliner but i just didn't have time which was a shame, this would be something that would've been done had i had more time on it.
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